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I don’t get it. What’s 24? And why is the first dialogue on the right, considering English is a left to right reading language?
And no, I don’t think you’re a bad artist. No one’s a bad artist. Everyone has their own way of expressing and drawing.
I’m turning 24
Also, the first dialogue is on the right because that’s who’s speaking. Considering I draw everyone of the same gender identically, I should’ve reversed the speech.
Height matters too. You can have text on the right be “first” but it needs to be obviously higher on the page.
Show me some of your art and I will be happy to give my opinion
If all your art looks like the single image provided, then the honest answer would be yes, unfortunately. That said, one image with minimal content isn’t much to go off, and as with any skill, this will change over time, esspecially with practice. Notably, this also looks like something dedicated to a loved one, so at that point intent matters more than artistic skill anyway.
Any homemade card is more thoughtful than a purchased one. So I don’t think it matters if you are a good artist or not. It’s a thoughtful message and you created it yourself.