Iced Raktajino@startrek.website to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 2 months agoWhen you realize your laptop hasn't been plugged in for the last 4 hours you've been working...startrek.websiteimagemessage-square38linkfedilinkarrow-up11arrow-down10
arrow-up11arrow-down1imageWhen you realize your laptop hasn't been plugged in for the last 4 hours you've been working...startrek.websiteIced Raktajino@startrek.website to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 2 months agomessage-square38linkfedilink
minus-squareAliasVortex@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up0·2 months agoNot to nitpick, but it’s only been a single page and I already feel like the author has over used the word “said”, is all the dialogue this bad?
minus-squareIced Raktajino@startrek.websiteOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up0·2 months agoNot really. There’s just a lot of characters in that scene (Muldoon, Hammond, Wu, Arnold, and Gennaro) all with dialog.
Not to nitpick, but it’s only been a single page and I already feel like the author has over used the word “said”, is all the dialogue this bad?
Not really. There’s just a lot of characters in that scene (Muldoon, Hammond, Wu, Arnold, and Gennaro) all with dialog.